Buenas conversaciones, buenos futuros
Caminando al Cielo...
Caminando al Cielo...
25 Febrero 2007
Después de que la luz, deja de posarse en nuestras almas, no sirve de nada llorar, y querer hacer lo que no hicimos cuando si la había.
Maritza Figueroa >
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Cual silueta se refleja en mi cabeza
Pierdo la noción del tiempo
Y creo que estás aún aquí inmerso
Tú en tu plena juventud
Echaste raíces en la tierra
Para luego dejarnos solo ese
Punto de luz de tu vida.
Fuimos tan libres como el viento
Tan unidos como el mar
Tan simples como la tierra
Tan alegres como la luz
En que punto nos separamos
En que momento dejamos de ser libres
Cuando pasamos a ser solo mortales
Cuando la luz se fue de nuestras vidas
Y siempre al pasar te recuerdo
Al ir y al salir de la ciudad
Y me siento culpable de no estar ahí
Y de no haber estado ese día para ti.
Pero ya no estás... es demasiado tarde
Nuestros caminos se separaron
Ahora estas más cerca del cielo
Y yo continuo en este maldito infierno
(N.del A.Dedicado a todos esos amigos, que ya no están con nosotros)
Comentarios
es hermoso lo q
es hermoso lo q escriviste,yo no tengo a mi amigo del alma....
y cada dia q pasa lo espero y no llega,eso me destruye cada dia mas el corazon......
te deseo exitos...
ariel siempre brillaras en mi corazon te amo
A mi amigo Pablo
A mi amigo Pablo Sepulveda.
Gracias por todo, te recordare siempre.
las palabras que salen ahora
las palabras que salen ahora de tu poema me parece interesante, se lo que es perder un amigo asi y te invade un sentimiento inexplicable cuando te acuerdas de el, pero a la vez buenos recuerdos. Excelente como te lo dije antes, me gustan tus poemas !!! XD
Tu poema lo sentí en el
Tu poema lo sentí en el corazón. Pero tambien me hizo sentir que hay un egoismo en mí. Porque si un ser querido se fue de nuestro lado, estará en un lugar mejor, lejos de sufrimientos fisicos y penas terrenales. A veces somos egoístas con lo que sentimos. Porque nosotros, los que nos quedamos en la tierra, en este cuerpo limitado, seguimos sufriendo. Debemos aceptar lo que viene y que eso nos sirva de lección de vida, que el amar es ahora, no al día siguiente. Y si logramos eso, el partir de los que queremos, te aseguro que no sería tan doloroso ni tan solo.
Tu poema lo sentí en el
Tu poema lo sentí en el corazón. Pero tambien me hizo sentir que hay un egoismo en mí. Porque si un ser querido se fue de nuestro lado, estará en un lugar mejor, lejos de sufrimientos fisicos y penas terrenales. A veces somos egoístas con lo que sentimos. Porque nosotros, los que nos quedamos en la tierra, en este cuerpo limitado, seguimos sufriendo. Debemos aceptar lo que viene y que eso nos sirva de lección de vida, que el amar es ahora, no al día siguiente. Y si logramos eso, el partir de los que queremos, te aseguro que no sería tan doloroso ni tan solo.
Maritza Felicidades, muy
Maritza Felicidades, muy lindo lo que acabo de leer
sigue adelante
saludos
Bueno, sin duda q tienes un
Bueno, sin duda q tienes un tremendo don...y tu lo sabes...
expresas cosas q muchos no sabriamos como...y por eso nos hace sentirnos identificados con tus palabras...
espero q sigas escribiendo mucho mas...aunq no me qeda duda q lo haras...
Besos...y Felicidades...
Arrivederci!!!
Maritza:
Maritza:
Muy bonito tu poema... yo experimente esa situación con unos amigos y se lo que es perder un amigo...
saludos... y Felicitaciones por el poema...
Coincido totalmente con el
Coincido totalmente con el comentario anterior ya que se manejan mucho las emociones y se utilizan en su justo momento sigue asi ya que eres muy buena.-
chao saludos.-
Felicidades, un muy buen
Felicidades, un muy buen poema, excelente manejo de emociones y interpretacion de estas, considero que tienes un gran potencial y manejo literario.
Espero ver mas escritos tuyos,
Saludos
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